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Posted by Eutychus (# 3081) on
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Brenton Brown's Your Love Is Amazing is surely a contender for the Crappy Choruses thread, but I thought it might also make for a Circus game.
The structure is basically as follows:
Verse:
AAAB
CCCB
Chorus:
Hallelujah, hallelujah, hallelujah, your love makes me sing x2
The aim of the author seems to have been to make the three rhyming lines as excruciating as possible, as in
Your love is surprising
I can feel it rising
All the joy that's growing
Deep inside of me
But I feel sure Shipmates would be up to the challenge of finding rhymes that are even worse.
Suggested rules as follows:
One poster supplies lines AA ('your love is...')
Next poster supplies lines AB
Another poster supplies lines CC ('your love is...')
Next poster supplies lines CB
(for extra style points, a poster is then allowed to post the chorus at this point before we start again).
To start us off, here are two "AA" lines:
Your love is amusing
I find it enthusing...
Posted by Raptor Eye (# 16649) on
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I just can't help myself
When I see your eyes.
Posted by jacobsen (# 14998) on
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Sorry, Raptor, but there is a rhyme scheme. Hope you don't mind if I follow it.
quote:
Originally posted by Eutychus:
Your love is amusing
I find it enthusing...
But your touch is quite bruising,
Be gentle with me.
[ 16. May 2015, 16:39: Message edited by: jacobsen ]
Posted by Eutychus (# 3081) on
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That's the idea, jacobsen!
Your love is astounding
I hear it resounding
Posted by Raptor Eye (# 16649) on
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quote:
Originally posted by jacobsen:
Sorry, Raptor, but there is a rhyme scheme. Hope you don't mind if I follow it.
Thank you jacobsen, I tried to delete it but missed the edit window. I'll fetch my coat.
Posted by L'organist (# 17338) on
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I feel my heart pounding,
I'm longing for thee
Posted by Eutychus (# 3081) on
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Ooh, I get to post a chorus!
#
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing
x2
#
Your love is uplifting
But my mind is drifting...
Posted by Piglet (# 11803) on
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And the sands they are shifting
By the edge of the sea.
Posted by Curiosity killed ... (# 11770) on
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Your love is so awesome,
Shows the wrongness of Dawson,
Posted by Eutychus (# 3081) on
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better than Welles (Orson)
No Citizen Kane for me...
Posted by jacobsen (# 14998) on
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My, turn, my turn!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing
x2
Posted by Amanda B. Reckondwythe (# 5521) on
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[Does that mean that I, as the next poster, get to start a rhyme?]
Your love makes my belly
Run over like jelly.
Posted by Piglet (# 11803) on
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while giving it "welly" *
In hymns sung to Thee.
* i.e. singing lustily and with good courage ![[Big Grin]](biggrin.gif)
Posted by Eutychus (# 3081) on
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Your love is perplexing
I sometimes find it vexing
Posted by Curiosity killed ... (# 11770) on
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When answers for the next thing,
Answer prayers to thee
Posted by Curiosity killed ... (# 11770) on
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I'll correct that, sorry:
When responses for the next thing,
Answer prayers to thee
Posted by Wet Kipper (# 1654) on
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#
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing
x2
#
Your love is so crazy
Even when I'm lazy
Posted by Pia (# 17277) on
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As fresh as a daisy
In the fields growing free
Posted by pimple (# 10635) on
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Your love's like a chocolate
digestive - a rock lit
Posted by Amanda B. Reckondwythe (# 5521) on
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And forcibly out-spit
To land on your knee.
#
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing
x2
#
Posted by Eutychus (# 3081) on
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Your love is fantastic
And it's quite elastic
Posted by Dafyd (# 5549) on
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Your collection takes plastic
So cash I needn't carry.
Posted by kingsfold (# 1726) on
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Your love is eternal,
More than just paternal
Posted by jrw (# 18045) on
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unlike that of the colonel
who doesn't even offer us a cup of tea
Posted by Amanda B. Reckondwythe (# 5521) on
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#
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing
x2
#
Your love fits the scansion
Like rooms in a mansion
Posted by Leorning Cniht (# 17564) on
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My heart shows expansion
So make your home here
Posted by Dafyd (# 5549) on
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Your love is like whisky
It makes me feel frisky
Posted by L'organist (# 17338) on
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As cute as a pixie
Who's longing to hear
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing! x2
Posted by jacobsen (# 14998) on
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Your love is ecstatic
And quite charismatic
[ 20. May 2015, 12:07: Message edited by: jacobsen ]
Posted by Charles Had a Splurge on (# 14140) on
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And just like my attic,
It's full to the brim
Posted by Eutychus (# 3081) on
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Your love is enduring
And it's not inuring...
/If I get a chance, I'll turn this into an audio recording at some point!
Posted by Amanda B. Reckondwythe (# 5521) on
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And rather alluring
But subject to whim.
[ 20. May 2015, 18:18: Message edited by: Amanda B. Reckondwythe ]
Posted by Eutychus (# 3081) on
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#
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing! x2
#
Posted by jrw (# 18045) on
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Your love's like a nice dream
You buy me an ice cream
Posted by Pia (# 17277) on
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Like a teen fan-girl I'll scream:
'I love you so much!'.
Posted by Amanda B. Reckondwythe (# 5521) on
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Your love's a reflection
Of ice-cream perfection
Posted by Charles Had a Splurge on (# 14140) on
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Raises my predilection
I long for your touch
Posted by jacobsen (# 14998) on
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#
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing! x2
#
Your love's my ambition,
No thought of sedition
Posted by Wet Kipper (# 1654) on
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Lord you have been Fishin'
I'm caught in your net
Posted by Gracie (# 3870) on
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Your love is expanding
It is just outstanding
Posted by Eutychus (# 3081) on
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But could be quite demanding
Do you want to bet?
Posted by L'organist (# 17338) on
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Hallelujah
Hallelujee
Riddle-me-ro
Riddle-me-ring
Hallelujah
Hallelujah
Hallelujah
Your love makes me sing
(I thought we could do with a change?)
Posted by Charles Had a Splurge on (# 14140) on
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Your love is contagious
I feel like a magus
Posted by Nenya (# 16427) on
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It pierces through my tragus,
I just wanna shout.
Posted by Charles Had a Splurge on (# 14140) on
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I wanna shout “hurrh”!
Gold, frankincense, myrrh
Posted by jacobsen (# 14998) on
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Love sticks like a burr
Which never comes out
Posted by Eutychus (# 3081) on
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#
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing
x2
#
Posted by no prophet's flag is set so... (# 15560) on
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Your love is a looking glass
Through which I see my large ass
Posted by Eutychus (# 3081) on
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That it can nevertheless encompass
(where are the bathroom scales?)
Posted by Charles Had a Splurge on (# 14140) on
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I’m riding on my donkey,
heading for the long quay
[ 21. May 2015, 15:11: Message edited by: Charles Had a Splurge on ]
Posted by Nenya (# 16427) on
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Ass-cheeks soft and wobbly
Like a pair of whales.
Posted by Eutychus (# 3081) on
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#
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing
x2
#
Posted by Amanda B. Reckondwythe (# 5521) on
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Your love is the pits,
Like a faceful of zits.
Posted by Charles Had a Splurge on (# 14140) on
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I head for the exits,
I have to escape
Posted by jacobsen (# 14998) on
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As I rush on my way
There's just this to say
Posted by Meike (# 3006) on
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I head for the bay
To reach the farthest cape.
(Well, you said "as excruciating as possible")
Posted by Eutychus (# 3081) on
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#
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing
x2
#
[this is going swimmingly, but note first lines are supposed to start with "your love is". As in:]
Your love is palpable
Like a Christmas bauble...
Posted by Charles Had a Splurge on (# 14140) on
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Holding a Papal Bull,
That captures my heart
Posted by Gamaliel (# 812) on
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Your love is electric,
I just don't expect it
Posted by Charles Had a Splurge on (# 14140) on
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A Ronaldo hat-trick,
That takes Barca apart
Posted by Pia (# 17277) on
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#
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing
x2
#
Your love is life-giving
A safe place to live in
Posted by Eutychus (# 3081) on
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Quite unlike New Malden
and none the worse for that
Posted by Charles Had a Splurge on (# 14140) on
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Your love is just sappy,
But I'm happy-clappy
Posted by L'organist (# 17338) on
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So stop being sappy
Beloved old bat.
Posted by Meike (# 3006) on
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#
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing
x2
#
Your love is omnipresent
Its presence so pleasant
Posted by Stejjie (# 13941) on
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I may eat some pheasant,
Or maybe some grouse.
Posted by jacobsen (# 14998) on
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But no time to fry it
'Cos I'm on a diet
[ 22. May 2015, 17:07: Message edited by: jacobsen ]
Posted by Amanda B. Reckondwythe (# 5521) on
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You'll like it -- go try it!
It tastes quite like mouse!
Posted by Eutychus (# 3081) on
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#
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing
x2
#
Posted by jacobsen (# 14998) on
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Your love is my passion
I feel quite in fashion
Posted by no prophet's flag is set so... (# 15560) on
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While feeding the chickens
or shov'ling manure
Posted by Eutychus (# 3081) on
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[note the rhyme pattern is supposed to be AAAB CCCB! But even old Brendon makes an exception from time to time, so we're ok]
Your love is entrancing
Even if I can't sing
Posted by Meike (# 3006) on
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I feel like dancing
Myself into a trance
Posted by Eutychus (# 3081) on
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[and the last line after each couplet should rhyme with the last line after the one before, e.g. manure/pure]
#
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing
x2
#
Posted by Dafyd (# 5549) on
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Your love is juicy as a mango
We're dancing a tango
Posted by jacobsen (# 14998) on
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I can't let this man go,
He's mine for all time.
Posted by Meike (# 3006) on
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[Sorry, Eutychus, lost track last time]
Your love is translucent
Like thin coffee for fifty cents
Posted by Eutychus (# 3081) on
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That doesn't even make sense
But the audio's now online¹
¹One-take on the fly of first ten minutes' worth, with bog-standard headset mike. Enjoy?
Posted by Stejjie (# 13941) on
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[Eutychus ![[Overused]](graemlins/notworthy.gif)
for singing that for 10 minutes!]
Your love is an ear-worm
In my head for the long-term Sorry, couldn't make that fit!
Posted by Meike (# 3006) on
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[ Ha ha, I especially liked the hurrh/myrrh line]
Tonight you should perform
at the ESC
[ 23. May 2015, 10:59: Message edited by: Meike ]
Posted by balaam (# 4543) on
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Your love is amazing,
just like double glazing,
Posted by Eutychus (# 3081) on
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I'm zapped as if by a tazing
On the count of three
Posted by Eutychus (# 3081) on
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[balaam I've nicked that suitably atrocious rhyme to put a plug in my sig!]
Posted by jacobsen (# 14998) on
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#
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing
x2
#
Your love says,"Kazoom!"
In my heart there is room
Posted by jacobsen (# 14998) on
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Eutychus - wonderful. You are hired!
Posted by balaam (# 4543) on
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As you died for all whom
Will receive your grace.
Posted by Amanda B. Reckondwythe (# 5521) on
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Your love is like grammar:
It strikes with a hammer.
Posted by Meike (# 3006) on
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Just like my old grandma
Said: „Use the right case!“
Posted by jacobsen (# 14998) on
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#
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing
x2
#
Beyond words is your love
As it falls from above
Posted by no prophet's flag is set so... (# 15560) on
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Like into a ball glove
drops a lead anvil
[ 23. May 2015, 15:52: Message edited by: no prophet's flag is set so... ]
Posted by Dafyd (# 5549) on
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Your love is as splendid
As music by Kendrick
Posted by Gamaliel (# 812) on
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Which isn't as eccentric
As the New York Phil' -
Posted by Eutychus (# 3081) on
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#
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing
x2
#
Posted by Aravis (# 13824) on
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Your love is forever
Like shoes of fine leather
[guess who's been browsing the "Shoes" thread in Heaven]
...
Posted by Gamaliel (# 812) on
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Good for stormy weather
And quite comfy too -
Posted by Meike (# 3006) on
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Your love is so stellar
Quite like Cinderella
Posted by Charles Had a Splurge on (# 14140) on
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So sharp it can fell a,
tree such as a yew
Posted by balaam (# 4543) on
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#
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing
x2
#
[b]Your love is so awesome,
It slackens my jaw some,
Posted by Charles Had a Splurge on (# 14140) on
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I know you adore dumb,
struck Fools of the Ship
Posted by Amanda B. Reckondwythe (# 5521) on
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Your love's all enclosing
Like a songster composing.
[ 23. May 2015, 19:53: Message edited by: Amanda B. Reckondwythe ]
Posted by Eutychus (# 3081) on
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What I'm simply proposing
Is badly rhymed worship...
Posted by Pia (# 17277) on
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Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing
x2
Your love is mind-blowing
Don't know where I'm going
(Eutychus... brilliant. Guess what my ear-worm is now?)
[ 23. May 2015, 21:38: Message edited by: Pia ]
Posted by Gamaliel (# 812) on
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All the time I'm growing
Impatient with bullshit -
Posted by Meike (# 3006) on
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Your love's like New York City
It makes me feel giddy
Posted by Nenya (# 16427) on
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quote:
Originally posted by Eutychus:
the audio's now online¹
Brilliant! Nice voice! ![[Smile]](smile.gif)
(I was really hoping we wouldn't sing this one in church this morning... fortunately we didn't.)
Feeds my inner kiddy -
Can't get enough of it.
Posted by Welease Woderwick (# 10424) on
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Your love is electric
Just like my Scalextric
[ 24. May 2015, 13:29: Message edited by: Welease Woderwick ]
Posted by balaam (# 4543) on
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I'm awaiting your next trick,
That should be dandy.
Posted by jacobsen (# 14998) on
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Your love's a sure card
For this humble bard
Posted by Amanda B. Reckondwythe (# 5521) on
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Like a salad with chard
Or an apple in candy!
Posted by Meike (# 3006) on
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Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing
x2
Your love is my fortress
When I am in distress
Posted by Pia (# 17277) on
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Just like a Disney princess
Your love makes me sing
Posted by Nenya (# 16427) on
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Your love is a minefield
Need to keep my eyes peeled
Posted by Eutychus (# 3081) on
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for the next episode of Seinfeld
and whatever life may bring
Posted by Nenya (# 16427) on
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Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing.
x 2
Your love is exacting,
Somewhat like pork crackling,
Posted by Pia (# 17277) on
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As read by Mikhail Bakhtin
It's carnivalesque
Posted by jacobsen (# 14998) on
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Dear God! What a rhyme scheme,
I've sorted my time-scheme
Posted by Eutychus (# 3081) on
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Smartened up with Brylcreem
And sorted out my desk.
Posted by jacobsen (# 14998) on
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Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing.
x 2
It's really quite quaint
How your love makes me faint
Posted by Meike (# 3006) on
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I cannot even understand
It’s mysterious
Posted by L'organist (# 17338) on
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More shivery than winter,
More pauses than pinter,
Posted by Amanda B. Reckondwythe (# 5521) on
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A finger with splinter,
And oozing with pus.
Posted by kingsfold (# 1726) on
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Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing.
x 2
Your love effervesces,
life in us effloresces
Posted by no prophet's flag is set so... (# 15560) on
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like bubbles in cesspools -
O Lord how it doth stink!
Posted by jacobsen (# 14998) on
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That rhyme was atrocious
I'm feeling ferocious
Posted by Nenya (# 16427) on
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Try to be precocious -
It's better, don't you think?
Posted by Meike (# 3006) on
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Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing.
x 2
Your love is the password
To open the whole world
Posted by Charles Had a Splurge on (# 14140) on
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Your flag is now unfurled,
on the castle of my heart
Posted by Gamaliel (# 812) on
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Just you watch it flutter
Don't murmur or mutter
Posted by jrw (# 18045) on
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You melt my heart like butter
You're number one in the charts
Posted by Charles Had a Splurge on (# 14140) on
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Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing.
x 2
Your love is iconic,
A column that's Doric
Posted by kingsfold (# 1726) on
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And isn't it ironic
we've gone on quite this long.....
Posted by Wet Kipper (# 1654) on
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You think we'd be fed up
but our thoughts get sped up
Posted by jacobsen (# 14998) on
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For we were all bred up
To continue our song
#
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing
x2
#
Posted by Charles Had a Splurge on (# 14140) on
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Your love is a classic,
A park that's Jurassic
Posted by Amanda B. Reckondwythe (# 5521) on
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A body thoracic,
A vein without plaque.
Posted by L'organist (# 17338) on
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The Rolls Royce of emotion,
Acme of devotion
Posted by Charles Had a Splurge on (# 14140) on
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The Pacific Ocean,
full of humpbacks
Posted by Eutychus (# 3081) on
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#
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing
x2
#
Posted by Nenya (# 16427) on
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Your love is delicious,
Sometimes quite seditious
Posted by Amanda B. Reckondwythe (# 5521) on
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But very nutritious,
Like honey on toast.
[ 26. May 2015, 17:39: Message edited by: Amanda B. Reckondwythe ]
Posted by Meike (# 3006) on
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Your love is like a sunbeam
It melts my heart like ice cream
Posted by Pia (# 17277) on
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It makes my dull world gleam
Surely this much thou know'st
Posted by Amanda B. Reckondwythe (# 5521) on
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#
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing
x2
#
Your love is amazing,
Like sheep safely grazing.
Posted by Meike (# 3006) on
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The clouds are gathering
The grass is green
Posted by Welease Woderwick (# 10424) on
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Your love is the Hippest
and makes me the fittest
Posted by Charles Had a Splurge on (# 14140) on
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'Cos like John the Baptist,
It washes me clean
Posted by Amanda B. Reckondwythe (# 5521) on
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#
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing
x2
#
Your love is rambunctious,
Uriah-Heep unctuous.
Posted by Welease Woderwick (# 10424) on
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It makes me so conscious
Of my falling short
Posted by Curiosity killed ... (# 11770) on
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Your love is purifying,
Makes us death defying,
Posted by Nenya (# 16427) on
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Fuzzy glow supplying,
Like a glass of port.
Posted by Eutychus (# 3081) on
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#
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing
x2
#
Posted by jacobsen (# 14998) on
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Your love is so squidgy
Mosquito-like, midgy
Posted by Meike (# 3006) on
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These rhymes are so catchy
And masterful.
Posted by Amanda B. Reckondwythe (# 5521) on
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Gerard Manley Hopkins
Would wish for some logins
Posted by Eutychus (# 3081) on
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Along with some egg noggins
By the bucketful.
Posted by Curiosity killed ... (# 11770) on
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Divinely gained earnings
God's proof most admirable
Posted by Nenya (# 16427) on
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A polyphonic finish to the stanza there.
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing.
x2
Posted by no prophet's flag is set so... (# 15560) on
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Your love is like doing homework
when the teacher isn't a jerk
Posted by jrw (# 18045) on
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and just like Captain James Kirk
we go where no one's been before
Posted by Autenrieth Road (# 10509) on
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Your love is like a banyan.
No, bigger: like a canyon
Posted by Welease Woderwick (# 10424) on
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Many layered like an onion,
You never are a bore.
Posted by Meike (# 3006) on
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#
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing
x2
#
Posted by Welease Woderwick (# 10424) on
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Your love is fantastic
it makes me feel gastric
Posted by Hiro's Leap (# 12470) on
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Like the Treaty of Maastricht,
Affects Nigel F.
Posted by Welease Woderwick (# 10424) on
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It is so phenomenal
It makes me abdominal
Posted by Eutychus (# 3081) on
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just like the abominable
snowman monster elf
Posted by Hiro's Leap (# 12470) on
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#
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing
x2
#
You love's never seedy,
Creepy or needy
Posted by kingsfold (# 1726) on
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quite so, Lord, oh indeedy
your love feels like a hug.
Posted by Charles Had a Splurge on (# 14140) on
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Your love is percussive,
A verb mood that's jussive
Posted by Hiro's Leap (# 12470) on
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A sharp pain post-tussive,
(I think I coughed lung.)
Posted by Amanda B. Reckondwythe (# 5521) on
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#
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing
x2
#
Your love is what ails me,
My face grows quite pale, see?
Posted by Welease Woderwick (# 10424) on
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You love folk in Nailsea,
which I find quite odd.
Posted by Meike (# 3006) on
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Your love is what sickens me
To death, but I stick with thee
Posted by Pia (# 17277) on
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Me and my mate, Timothy
Love you more than chips and cod.
Posted by Eutychus (# 3081) on
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#
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing
x2
#
Posted by Amanda B. Reckondwythe (# 5521) on
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Your love is maturing
Like smoked meat a-curing
Posted by Curiosity killed ... (# 11770) on
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Like compost manuring;
And growing our love.
Posted by balaam (# 4543) on
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Your love's so enrichin'
That I'll stop my bitchin'
Posted by Hiro's Leap (# 12470) on
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The unfortunate itchin'?
A gift from above.
[ 29. May 2015, 22:43: Message edited by: Hiro's Leap ]
Posted by Meike (# 3006) on
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#
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing
x2
#
Posted by Charles Had a Splurge on (# 14140) on
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Your love's automatic,
My response charismatic
Posted by L'organist (# 17338) on
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(Could it be I'm asthmatic?)
It makes my head spin.
Posted by jacobsen (# 14998) on
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From attic to cellar
My feelings are stellar
[ 30. May 2015, 10:01: Message edited by: jacobsen ]
Posted by Charles Had a Splurge on (# 14140) on
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I'm a lucky feller,
To have your Spirit within
Posted by Eutychus (# 3081) on
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Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing
x2
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Posted by Amanda B. Reckondwythe (# 5521) on
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Your love is astounding,
Like headaches a-pounding.
Posted by Welease Woderwick (# 10424) on
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and urethral sounding
and other such things
Posted by Nenya (# 16427) on
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Your love is enthralling,
Like a meteor falling
Posted by Meike (# 3006) on
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And the light unfailing
From the heavens, methinks.
Posted by Eutychus (# 3081) on
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Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing
x2
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[And a special alert! This thread is going to be closed as soon as a Circus host gets to it on Monday, June 1st Ship time, pending future developments! So you've just time to get in another suitably cringeworthy verse or two!]
Posted by Nenya (# 16427) on
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Your love's like this Ship thread,
Keeps me on a knife edge
Posted by balaam (# 4543) on
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It's driving a sharp wedge
Between me and transgression.
(Rhyme that ![[Devil]](graemlins/devil.gif)
)
Posted by Curiosity killed ... (# 11770) on
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Your love is o'erpowering,
Truth telling empowering,
(Was thinking confession as a rhyme)
Posted by Eutychus (# 3081) on
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[happy to oblige... ![[Two face]](graemlins/scot_twoface.gif)
]
With me blessings showering
Even when I don't go to confession
[ 31. May 2015, 07:49: Message edited by: Eutychus ]
Posted by Nenya (# 16427) on
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Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing.
x2
Are we building up to a finale? *adopts worshipful pose with half-closed eyes and repeats "Your love makes me sing" a few times in ever softer tones*
Posted by Pia (# 17277) on
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[We can fit another verse in surely? How about this, as a starter, for Trinity Sunday?]
Your love's in three persons
The Father's the first one
Posted by Nenya (# 16427) on
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Number two's a Persian,
Jesus is his name.
Posted by L'organist (# 17338) on
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And then I've a Burmese
Who the children called Hermes
Posted by jacobsen (# 14998) on
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The third, if you please,
Is theParaclete by name.
[ 31. May 2015, 16:56: Message edited by: jacobsen ]
Posted by Nenya (# 16427) on
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Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing.
X 2
This thread's been courageous,
Occasionally outrageous,
Also quite contagious,
Tests our rhyming banks.
Amusing and heart-warming,
Also earworm forming,
Eutychus performing;
For it I give thanks.
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
Your love makes me sing.
X 2
Posted by jacobsen (# 14998) on
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Was that goodbye, I ask?
Is it complete, the task?
Posted by Pia (# 17277) on
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Eutychus, you should bask
In our love, admiring.
Posted by jacobsen (# 14998) on
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For we could continue this
Game in ongoing bliss
Posted by Pia (# 17277) on
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But we'd be taking the p*ss.
Nay, no more should we sing.
Posted by Kelly Alves (# 2522) on
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Hallelujah, hallelujah, etc...
After much copy and pasting, I am happy to announce that your collective efforts have given us a total of 45 stanzas (counting the extra 'hallelujah')!
Well done, everyone!
Please stay tuned to the circus pending further developments.
Kelly Alves
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