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Thread: Circus: Your Love Is Amazing (Rhymes? Excruciating)
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Nenya
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Ass-cheeks soft and wobbly Like a pair of whales.
-------------------- They told me I was delusional. I nearly fell off my unicorn.
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Eutychus
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# Hallelujah! Hallelujah! Hallelujah! Your love makes me sing x2 #
-------------------- Let's remember that we are to build the Kingdom of God, not drive people away - pastor Frank Pomeroy
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Amanda B. Reckondwythe
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Your love is the pits, Like a faceful of zits.
-------------------- "I take prayer too seriously to use it as an excuse for avoiding work and responsibility." -- The Revd Martin Luther King Jr.
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Charles Had a Splurge on
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I head for the exits, I have to escape
-------------------- "But to live outside the law, you must be honest" R.A. Zimmerman
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jacobsen
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As I rush on my way There's just this to say
-------------------- But God, holding a candle, looks for all who wander, all who search. - Shifra Alon Beauty fades, dumb is forever-Judge Judy The man who made time, made plenty.
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Meike
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I head for the bay To reach the farthest cape.
(Well, you said "as excruciating as possible")
-------------------- “A god who let us prove his existence would be an idol” ― Dietrich Bonhoeffer
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Eutychus
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# Hallelujah! Hallelujah! Hallelujah! Your love makes me sing x2 #
[this is going swimmingly, but note first lines are supposed to start with "your love is". As in:]
Your love is palpable Like a Christmas bauble...
-------------------- Let's remember that we are to build the Kingdom of God, not drive people away - pastor Frank Pomeroy
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Charles Had a Splurge on
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Holding a Papal Bull, That captures my heart
-------------------- "But to live outside the law, you must be honest" R.A. Zimmerman
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Charles Had a Splurge on
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A Ronaldo hat-trick, That takes Barca apart
-------------------- "But to live outside the law, you must be honest" R.A. Zimmerman
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Pia
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# Hallelujah! Hallelujah! Hallelujah! Your love makes me sing x2 #
Your love is life-giving A safe place to live in
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Eutychus
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Quite unlike New Malden and none the worse for that
-------------------- Let's remember that we are to build the Kingdom of God, not drive people away - pastor Frank Pomeroy
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Charles Had a Splurge on
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Your love is just sappy, But I'm happy-clappy
-------------------- "But to live outside the law, you must be honest" R.A. Zimmerman
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L'organist
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So stop being sappy Beloved old bat.
-------------------- Rara temporum felicitate ubi sentire quae velis et quae sentias dicere licet
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Meike
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# Hallelujah! Hallelujah! Hallelujah! Your love makes me sing x2 #
Your love is omnipresent Its presence so pleasant
-------------------- “A god who let us prove his existence would be an idol” ― Dietrich Bonhoeffer
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Stejjie
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I may eat some pheasant, Or maybe some grouse.
-------------------- A not particularly-alt-worshippy, fairly mainstream, mildly evangelical, vaguely post-modern-ish Baptist
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jacobsen
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But no time to fry it 'Cos I'm on a diet [ 22. May 2015, 17:07: Message edited by: jacobsen ]
-------------------- But God, holding a candle, looks for all who wander, all who search. - Shifra Alon Beauty fades, dumb is forever-Judge Judy The man who made time, made plenty.
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Amanda B. Reckondwythe
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You'll like it -- go try it! It tastes quite like mouse!
-------------------- "I take prayer too seriously to use it as an excuse for avoiding work and responsibility." -- The Revd Martin Luther King Jr.
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Eutychus
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# Hallelujah! Hallelujah! Hallelujah! Your love makes me sing x2 #
-------------------- Let's remember that we are to build the Kingdom of God, not drive people away - pastor Frank Pomeroy
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jacobsen
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Your love is my passion I feel quite in fashion
-------------------- But God, holding a candle, looks for all who wander, all who search. - Shifra Alon Beauty fades, dumb is forever-Judge Judy The man who made time, made plenty.
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no prophet's flag is set so...
Proceed to see sea
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While feeding the chickens or shov'ling manure
-------------------- Out of this nettle, danger, we pluck this flower, safety. \_(ツ)_/
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Eutychus
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[note the rhyme pattern is supposed to be AAAB CCCB! But even old Brendon makes an exception from time to time, so we're ok]
Your love is entrancing Even if I can't sing
-------------------- Let's remember that we are to build the Kingdom of God, not drive people away - pastor Frank Pomeroy
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Meike
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I feel like dancing Myself into a trance
-------------------- “A god who let us prove his existence would be an idol” ― Dietrich Bonhoeffer
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Eutychus
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[and the last line after each couplet should rhyme with the last line after the one before, e.g. manure/pure]
# Hallelujah! Hallelujah! Hallelujah! Your love makes me sing x2 #
-------------------- Let's remember that we are to build the Kingdom of God, not drive people away - pastor Frank Pomeroy
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Dafyd
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Your love is juicy as a mango We're dancing a tango
-------------------- we remain, thanks to original sin, much in love with talking about, rather than with, one another. Rowan Williams
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jacobsen
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I can't let this man go, He's mine for all time.
-------------------- But God, holding a candle, looks for all who wander, all who search. - Shifra Alon Beauty fades, dumb is forever-Judge Judy The man who made time, made plenty.
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Meike
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[Sorry, Eutychus, lost track last time]
Your love is translucent Like thin coffee for fifty cents
-------------------- “A god who let us prove his existence would be an idol” ― Dietrich Bonhoeffer
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Eutychus
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That doesn't even make sense But the audio's now online¹
¹One-take on the fly of first ten minutes' worth, with bog-standard headset mike. Enjoy?
-------------------- Let's remember that we are to build the Kingdom of God, not drive people away - pastor Frank Pomeroy
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Stejjie
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[Eutychus for singing that for 10 minutes!]
Your love is an ear-worm In my head for the long-term Sorry, couldn't make that fit!
-------------------- A not particularly-alt-worshippy, fairly mainstream, mildly evangelical, vaguely post-modern-ish Baptist
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Meike
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[ Ha ha, I especially liked the hurrh/myrrh line]
Tonight you should perform at the ESC [ 23. May 2015, 10:59: Message edited by: Meike ]
-------------------- “A god who let us prove his existence would be an idol” ― Dietrich Bonhoeffer
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balaam
Making an ass of myself
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Your love is amazing, just like double glazing,
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Eutychus
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I'm zapped as if by a tazing On the count of three
-------------------- Let's remember that we are to build the Kingdom of God, not drive people away - pastor Frank Pomeroy
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Eutychus
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[balaam I've nicked that suitably atrocious rhyme to put a plug in my sig!]
-------------------- Let's remember that we are to build the Kingdom of God, not drive people away - pastor Frank Pomeroy
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jacobsen
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# Hallelujah! Hallelujah! Hallelujah! Your love makes me sing x2 #
Your love says,"Kazoom!" In my heart there is room
-------------------- But God, holding a candle, looks for all who wander, all who search. - Shifra Alon Beauty fades, dumb is forever-Judge Judy The man who made time, made plenty.
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jacobsen
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Eutychus - wonderful. You are hired!
-------------------- But God, holding a candle, looks for all who wander, all who search. - Shifra Alon Beauty fades, dumb is forever-Judge Judy The man who made time, made plenty.
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balaam
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As you died for all whom Will receive your grace.
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Amanda B. Reckondwythe
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Your love is like grammar: It strikes with a hammer.
-------------------- "I take prayer too seriously to use it as an excuse for avoiding work and responsibility." -- The Revd Martin Luther King Jr.
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Meike
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Just like my old grandma Said: „Use the right case!“
-------------------- “A god who let us prove his existence would be an idol” ― Dietrich Bonhoeffer
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jacobsen
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# Hallelujah! Hallelujah! Hallelujah! Your love makes me sing x2 #
Beyond words is your love As it falls from above
-------------------- But God, holding a candle, looks for all who wander, all who search. - Shifra Alon Beauty fades, dumb is forever-Judge Judy The man who made time, made plenty.
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no prophet's flag is set so...
Proceed to see sea
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Like into a ball glove drops a lead anvil [ 23. May 2015, 15:52: Message edited by: no prophet's flag is set so... ]
-------------------- Out of this nettle, danger, we pluck this flower, safety. \_(ツ)_/
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Dafyd
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Your love is as splendid As music by Kendrick
-------------------- we remain, thanks to original sin, much in love with talking about, rather than with, one another. Rowan Williams
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Eutychus
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# Hallelujah! Hallelujah! Hallelujah! Your love makes me sing x2 #
-------------------- Let's remember that we are to build the Kingdom of God, not drive people away - pastor Frank Pomeroy
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Aravis
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Your love is forever Like shoes of fine leather
[guess who's been browsing the "Shoes" thread in Heaven]
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Meike
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Your love is so stellar Quite like Cinderella
-------------------- “A god who let us prove his existence would be an idol” ― Dietrich Bonhoeffer
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Charles Had a Splurge on
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So sharp it can fell a, tree such as a yew
-------------------- "But to live outside the law, you must be honest" R.A. Zimmerman
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balaam
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# Hallelujah! Hallelujah! Hallelujah! Your love makes me sing x2 #
[b]Your love is so awesome, It slackens my jaw some,
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Charles Had a Splurge on
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I know you adore dumb, struck Fools of the Ship
-------------------- "But to live outside the law, you must be honest" R.A. Zimmerman
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Amanda B. Reckondwythe
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Your love's all enclosing Like a songster composing. [ 23. May 2015, 19:53: Message edited by: Amanda B. Reckondwythe ]
-------------------- "I take prayer too seriously to use it as an excuse for avoiding work and responsibility." -- The Revd Martin Luther King Jr.
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