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Kelly Alves

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Please refer to this document for the following:

The Shipmate produced "Your Love is Amazing" parody yielded a staggering 45 verses ! (counting the extra "Hallelujah" option.)
Here is what we need you to do:

1. Select (up to) 7 of your favorite stanzas from the list above.

2. List them in your reply to this OP, along with the stanza number, the first line (to avoid confusion)

3. If you wish, a sentence or two explaining why you chose your choice.

Suggested format:
6. Your love fits the scansion

It is self referencing in a subtle way, and makes the stanzas that don't scan properly that much funnier since we pointed it out.


Go to it! More to follow...

[ 09. July 2016, 02:31: Message edited by: Kelly Alves ]

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Adam.

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23 Your love is so awesome,

For much the same reason: it references the writing process and the Ship.

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I'll nominate 41 Your love is maturing just because comparing God's love to manure, but doing it well enough that it almost works, that's pretty amusing.

[ 08. June 2015, 13:45: Message edited by: Gwai ]

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jacobsen

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Just printed of the oeuvre. Will post when I've stopped laughing.

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Kelly Alves

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Yes, I forgot to say-- it will probably be easier to make your selections if you primt out the list.

And let me encourage you to pick more than one! We are aiming at ten stanzas, so casting a wider net will help us determine which are the most popular. I wiil come up with my own list later today. ( and remember, explaining your vote is optional,.)

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Jesus loves me, this I know” of they don’t believe “Kelly loves me, this I know.”
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Trudy Scrumptious

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I nominate:

11. Your love is contagious

12. Your love is a looking glass

16. Your love is omnipresent

26. Your love is my fortress

27. Your love is exacting

32. Your love is a classic

38. Your love is fantastic

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Meike
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I vote for:

6. Your love fits the scansion
11. Your love is contagious
16. Your love is omnipresent
23. Your love is so awesome
24. Your love is mind-blowing
31. Your love is iconic
38. Your love is fantastic

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jacobsen

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1. Your love is amusing
7. Your love is ecstatic
9. Your love's my ambition
13. Your love is the pits
22. Your love is forever
23. Your love is so awesome
46. Was that goodbye, I ask?

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Kelly Alves

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OK!


2. Your love is uplifting

3. Your love makes my belly

6. Your love fits the scansion

27 Your love is exacting,

39 You love's never seedy,

43 Your love is astounding,

45 Your love's in three persons

[ 10. June 2015, 05:31: Message edited by: Kelly Alves ]

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I cannot expect people to believe “
Jesus loves me, this I know” of they don’t believe “Kelly loves me, this I know.”
Kelly Alves, somewhere around 2003.

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Mamacita

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Here's my list:

6. Your love fits the scansion
22. Your love is forever
23. Your love is so awesome
26. Your love is my fortress
32. Your love is a classic
34. Your love is amazing
45. Your love's in three persons


And a big [Overused] to everyone who contributed a verse!

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6. Your love fits the scansion
11. Your love is contagious (just for the hurrh/ myrrh rhyme really)
23. Your love is so awesome
27. Your love is exacting (because 'Dear God, what a rhyme scheme...')
33. Your love is delicious (because... mmm... toast)
35. Your love is rambunctious (because... 'rambunctious'!)
46. Was that goodbye I ask (because every good(?) song needs an ending. (Can I suggest a massive cheesy rall. on the last two lines?))

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we sang the Real thing™ yesterday, couldn't help but sing some of our newer words in my head.

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Kelly Alves

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Keep your selections coming, folks!

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I cannot expect people to believe “
Jesus loves me, this I know” of they don’t believe “Kelly loves me, this I know.”
Kelly Alves, somewhere around 2003.

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jrw
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10. Hallelujah, Hallelujee, Riddle-me-ro, etc
18. Your love is juicy as a mango
19. Your love is an ear-worm
22. Your love is forever
38. Your love is fantastic
40. Your love is what ails me
42. Your love's automatic

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Kelly Alves

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[Yipee]

Maybe this is a separate vote, but I am assuming everyone is OK with the extra Hallelujah verse. I myself can't complete the earworm without hearing it.

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I cannot expect people to believe “
Jesus loves me, this I know” of they don’t believe “Kelly loves me, this I know.”
Kelly Alves, somewhere around 2003.

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Kelly Alves

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Last Push! Voting will end soon!

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I cannot expect people to believe “
Jesus loves me, this I know” of they don’t believe “Kelly loves me, this I know.”
Kelly Alves, somewhere around 2003.

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16. Your love is omnipresent

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Piglet
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My choices (for what they're worth):

3. Your love makes my belly ...

[DECLARATION OF INTEREST: I may have written the second half of that verse. [Big Grin] ]

5. Your love is fantastic ...

the end of which naturally leads into

6. Your love fits the scansion ...

16. Your love is omnipresent ...

31. Your love is iconic ...

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Hello Euroworship! Here are the votes of our jury.

7. Your love is ecstatic
42. Your love’s automatic
23. Your love is so awesome
38. Your love is fantastic
32. Your love is a classic
24. Your love is electric


But in true Euro tradition we'll go with a decision made by others...
[Snigger]

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My votes (in no particular order) are:

  • 06. Your love fits the scansion...
  • 11. Your love is contagious...
  • 17. Your love is my passion...
  • 22. Your love is forever...
  • 40. Your love is what ails me...
  • 44. Your love's in three persons...


Those were the ones that most made me chuckle and think - oo, that's clever.

I've not experienced the original song that has inspired this creative endeavour, although I suppose if the Ship decided to get a bunch of Ship musicians and singers together to form a one-time-only worship-band pub-meet to record the final selected stanzas, and maybe a full-length interminable 'uncut' version too for a B-side (oh yes, I would come and play for that [Big Grin] ) I might have to research the original, just to appreciate the parody better. Otherwise it sounds like I've not missed anything!

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Kelly Alves

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quote:
Originally posted by luvanddaisies:
My votes (in no particular order) are:

  • 06. Your love fits the scansion...
  • 11. Your love is contagious...
  • 17. Your love is my passion...
  • 22. Your love is forever...
  • 40. Your love is what ails me...
  • 44. Your love's in three persons...


Those were the ones that most made me chuckle and think - oo, that's clever.

I've not experienced the original song that has inspired this creative endeavour, although I suppose if the Ship decided to get a bunch of Ship musicians and singers together to form a one-time-only worship-band pub-meet to record the final selected stanzas, and maybe a full-length interminable 'uncut' version too for a B-side (oh yes, I would come and play for that [Big Grin] ) I might have to research the original, just to appreciate the parody better. Otherwise it sounds like I've not missed anything!

Hold that thought. [Biased]

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I cannot expect people to believe “
Jesus loves me, this I know” of they don’t believe “Kelly loves me, this I know.”
Kelly Alves, somewhere around 2003.

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kingsfold

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3. Your love makes my belly
6. your love fits the scansion
18. your love is juicy as a mango
23 your love is so awesome
36 your love is so squidgy
41 your love is maturing
46 was that goodbye I ask

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Eutychus
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I suppose I'd better contribute to this quick...

5. Your love is fantastic (actually means something, scansion suitably terrible)
10. Hallelujah (because we need one oddball chorus)
11. Your love is contagious (because somebody liked "myyrh" and "burr" in the video)
12. Your love is a looking glass (donkey and long quay counts as the worst rhyme, visual imagery is arresting)
27. Your love is exacting (fun rhymes)
33. Your love is delicious (because it has a "thou" in it)
44. Your love's like this Ship thread (another awful piece of scansion)

Luvanddaisies, the original song was linked to at the start of the original thread; here it is again for your earworming pleasure [Axe murder]

#Hallelujah, hallelujah...#

[ 23. June 2015, 18:39: Message edited by: Eutychus ]

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Jemima the 9th
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I vote:

No6: Your love fits the scansion (because it's clever, also features whisky & frisky)
No12: Your love is a looking glass (for the ass-cheeks bit)
No15: Your love is life-giving (for the New Malden ref)
No16: Your love is omnipresent (for randomness)
No38: Your love is fantastic (for Maastricht)
No40: Your love is what ails me (for fish & chips)
No46: Was that goodbye I ask? (It rounds things up nicely)

Also: a huge thanks to Eutychus for starting all this. It's made me cry with laughter, and is definitely the best thing to happen to that song. Thank you.

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jacobsen

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quote:
Originally posted by Kelly Alves:
quote:
Originally posted by luvanddaisies:


I've not experienced the original song that has inspired this creative endeavour, although I suppose if the Ship decided to get a bunch of Ship musicians and singers together to form a one-time-only worship-band pub-meet to record the final selected stanzas, and maybe a full-length interminable 'uncut' version too for a B-side (oh yes, I would come and play for that [Big Grin] ) I might have to research the original, just to appreciate the parody better. Otherwise it sounds like I've not missed anything!

Hold that thought. [Biased]
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Kelly Alves

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SO hold that thought. [Yipee]

Due to current developments, I shall now declare this thread CLOSED.

Thank you all so much for your selections-- we will use them to help us craft a canonical version.

Squuueeee!

Kelly Alves
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I cannot expect people to believe “
Jesus loves me, this I know” of they don’t believe “Kelly loves me, this I know.”
Kelly Alves, somewhere around 2003.

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Kelly Alves

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Here it is, Gang!

For those brave souls who wish to accept the challenge, a printable version of "Your Love is..." is available in the above link, from which you can practice for any Shipmeet singalong that might spontaneously arise.

(I suggest you work off of Euty's Youtube clip to center yourselves on the same key.)

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I cannot expect people to believe “
Jesus loves me, this I know” of they don’t believe “Kelly loves me, this I know.”
Kelly Alves, somewhere around 2003.

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Kelly - you're a star - a HUGE, HUGE star!

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Kelly Alves

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[Hot and Hormonal] aw, shucks.

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I cannot expect people to believe “
Jesus loves me, this I know” of they don’t believe “Kelly loves me, this I know.”
Kelly Alves, somewhere around 2003.

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