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Kelly Alves
Bunny with an axe
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Please refer to this document for the following:
The Shipmate produced "Your Love is Amazing" parody yielded a staggering 45 verses ! (counting the extra "Hallelujah" option.) Here is what we need you to do:
1. Select (up to) 7 of your favorite stanzas from the list above.
2. List them in your reply to this OP, along with the stanza number, the first line (to avoid confusion)
3. If you wish, a sentence or two explaining why you chose your choice.
Suggested format: 6. Your love fits the scansion
It is self referencing in a subtle way, and makes the stanzas that don't scan properly that much funnier since we pointed it out.
Go to it! More to follow... [ 09. July 2016, 02:31: Message edited by: Kelly Alves ]
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Adam.
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23 Your love is so awesome,
For much the same reason: it references the writing process and the Ship.
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jacobsen
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Just printed of the oeuvre. Will post when I've stopped laughing.
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Kelly Alves
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Yes, I forgot to say-- it will probably be easier to make your selections if you primt out the list.
And let me encourage you to pick more than one! We are aiming at ten stanzas, so casting a wider net will help us determine which are the most popular. I wiil come up with my own list later today. ( and remember, explaining your vote is optional,.)
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Trudy Scrumptious
BBE Shieldmaiden
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I nominate:
11. Your love is contagious
12. Your love is a looking glass
16. Your love is omnipresent
26. Your love is my fortress
27. Your love is exacting
32. Your love is a classic
38. Your love is fantastic
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Meike
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I vote for:
6. Your love fits the scansion 11. Your love is contagious 16. Your love is omnipresent 23. Your love is so awesome 24. Your love is mind-blowing 31. Your love is iconic 38. Your love is fantastic
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jacobsen
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1. Your love is amusing 7. Your love is ecstatic 9. Your love's my ambition 13. Your love is the pits 22. Your love is forever 23. Your love is so awesome 46. Was that goodbye, I ask?
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Kelly Alves
Bunny with an axe
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OK!
2. Your love is uplifting
3. Your love makes my belly
6. Your love fits the scansion
27 Your love is exacting,
39 You love's never seedy,
43 Your love is astounding,
45 Your love's in three persons [ 10. June 2015, 05:31: Message edited by: Kelly Alves ]
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Mamacita
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Here's my list:
6. Your love fits the scansion 22. Your love is forever 23. Your love is so awesome 26. Your love is my fortress 32. Your love is a classic 34. Your love is amazing 45. Your love's in three persons
And a big to everyone who contributed a verse!
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Pia
Shipmate
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6. Your love fits the scansion 11. Your love is contagious (just for the hurrh/ myrrh rhyme really) 23. Your love is so awesome 27. Your love is exacting (because 'Dear God, what a rhyme scheme...') 33. Your love is delicious (because... mmm... toast) 35. Your love is rambunctious (because... 'rambunctious'!) 46. Was that goodbye I ask (because every good(?) song needs an ending. (Can I suggest a massive cheesy rall. on the last two lines?))
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Wet Kipper
Circus Runaway
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we sang the Real thing™ yesterday, couldn't help but sing some of our newer words in my head.
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Kelly Alves
Bunny with an axe
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Keep your selections coming, folks!
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jrw
Shipmate
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10. Hallelujah, Hallelujee, Riddle-me-ro, etc 18. Your love is juicy as a mango 19. Your love is an ear-worm 22. Your love is forever 38. Your love is fantastic 40. Your love is what ails me 42. Your love's automatic
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Kelly Alves
Bunny with an axe
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Maybe this is a separate vote, but I am assuming everyone is OK with the extra Hallelujah verse. I myself can't complete the earworm without hearing it.
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Kelly Alves
Bunny with an axe
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Last Push! Voting will end soon!
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balaam
Making an ass of myself
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16. Your love is omnipresent
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Piglet
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My choices (for what they're worth):
3. Your love makes my belly ...
[DECLARATION OF INTEREST: I may have written the second half of that verse. ]
5. Your love is fantastic ...
the end of which naturally leads into
6. Your love fits the scansion ...
16. Your love is omnipresent ...
31. Your love is iconic ...
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L'organist
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Hello Euroworship! Here are the votes of our jury.
7. Your love is ecstatic 42. Your love’s automatic 23. Your love is so awesome 38. Your love is fantastic 32. Your love is a classic 24. Your love is electric
But in true Euro tradition we'll go with a decision made by others...
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luvanddaisies
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My votes (in no particular order) are:
- 06. Your love fits the scansion...
- 11. Your love is contagious...
- 17. Your love is my passion...
- 22. Your love is forever...
- 40. Your love is what ails me...
- 44. Your love's in three persons...
Those were the ones that most made me chuckle and think - oo, that's clever.
I've not experienced the original song that has inspired this creative endeavour, although I suppose if the Ship decided to get a bunch of Ship musicians and singers together to form a one-time-only worship-band pub-meet to record the final selected stanzas, and maybe a full-length interminable 'uncut' version too for a B-side (oh yes, I would come and play for that ) I might have to research the original, just to appreciate the parody better. Otherwise it sounds like I've not missed anything!
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Kelly Alves
Bunny with an axe
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quote: Originally posted by luvanddaisies: My votes (in no particular order) are:
- 06. Your love fits the scansion...
- 11. Your love is contagious...
- 17. Your love is my passion...
- 22. Your love is forever...
- 40. Your love is what ails me...
- 44. Your love's in three persons...
Those were the ones that most made me chuckle and think - oo, that's clever.
I've not experienced the original song that has inspired this creative endeavour, although I suppose if the Ship decided to get a bunch of Ship musicians and singers together to form a one-time-only worship-band pub-meet to record the final selected stanzas, and maybe a full-length interminable 'uncut' version too for a B-side (oh yes, I would come and play for that ) I might have to research the original, just to appreciate the parody better. Otherwise it sounds like I've not missed anything!
Hold that thought.
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kingsfold
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3. Your love makes my belly 6. your love fits the scansion 18. your love is juicy as a mango 23 your love is so awesome 36 your love is so squidgy 41 your love is maturing 46 was that goodbye I ask
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Eutychus
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I suppose I'd better contribute to this quick...
5. Your love is fantastic (actually means something, scansion suitably terrible) 10. Hallelujah (because we need one oddball chorus) 11. Your love is contagious (because somebody liked "myyrh" and "burr" in the video) 12. Your love is a looking glass (donkey and long quay counts as the worst rhyme, visual imagery is arresting) 27. Your love is exacting (fun rhymes) 33. Your love is delicious (because it has a "thou" in it) 44. Your love's like this Ship thread (another awful piece of scansion)
Luvanddaisies, the original song was linked to at the start of the original thread; here it is again for your earworming pleasure
#Hallelujah, hallelujah...# [ 23. June 2015, 18:39: Message edited by: Eutychus ]
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Jemima the 9th
Shipmate
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I vote:
No6: Your love fits the scansion (because it's clever, also features whisky & frisky) No12: Your love is a looking glass (for the ass-cheeks bit) No15: Your love is life-giving (for the New Malden ref) No16: Your love is omnipresent (for randomness) No38: Your love is fantastic (for Maastricht) No40: Your love is what ails me (for fish & chips) No46: Was that goodbye I ask? (It rounds things up nicely)
Also: a huge thanks to Eutychus for starting all this. It's made me cry with laughter, and is definitely the best thing to happen to that song. Thank you.
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jacobsen
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quote: Originally posted by Kelly Alves: quote: Originally posted by luvanddaisies:
I've not experienced the original song that has inspired this creative endeavour, although I suppose if the Ship decided to get a bunch of Ship musicians and singers together to form a one-time-only worship-band pub-meet to record the final selected stanzas, and maybe a full-length interminable 'uncut' version too for a B-side (oh yes, I would come and play for that ) I might have to research the original, just to appreciate the parody better. Otherwise it sounds like I've not missed anything!
Hold that thought.
One concertina at the ready to give the Sally Army touch.
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Kelly Alves
Bunny with an axe
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SO hold that thought.
Due to current developments, I shall now declare this thread CLOSED.
Thank you all so much for your selections-- we will use them to help us craft a canonical version.
Squuueeee!
Kelly Alves Very Excited Admin
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Kelly Alves
Bunny with an axe
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Here it is, Gang!
For those brave souls who wish to accept the challenge, a printable version of "Your Love is..." is available in the above link, from which you can practice for any Shipmeet singalong that might spontaneously arise.
(I suggest you work off of Euty's Youtube clip to center yourselves on the same key.)
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Welease Woderwick
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Kelly - you're a star - a HUGE, HUGE star!
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Kelly Alves
Bunny with an axe
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aw, shucks.
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